Ensure all spelling and grammar is correct
Could use more specialist vocabulary and check grammar.
Ensure all references are done correctly and in the APA formatting.
Could focus more on genre/narrative
Could link Richard Dyer and Medhurst's theories on representation.
ibid needs to be in lower case and in italics.
Need to cut down investigation to 2000 words
Need 1 more book reference to get to 10
Put a quote in conclusion
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